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Post by hollypop on Mar 8, 2006 11:06:33 GMT -5
WOW!!!! Alright, maybe it's not the best word to describe your latest update, jm, but I truthfully I cannot think of any words to describe what I just read. This has got to be your best update so far- it truly is remarkable.
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 8, 2006 12:52:51 GMT -5
I have reached a milestone here and now 900 reads!!!!
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Post by carlylenz on Mar 8, 2006 13:12:04 GMT -5
Great job! It gets better with every update!
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 9, 2006 4:28:08 GMT -5
Thanks, it is is almost time for another update, this story is almost told, which is both a relief and is sad because I have really enjoyed writing it as I have enjoyed reading people make comments on it. But alas, you know what they say about all good things...they must END.
NEXT UPDATE: COMING LATER ON....STAY TUNED....
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Post by hydrokinisis on Mar 10, 2006 13:04:13 GMT -5
Hey jmasonii, great job with both updates, I'm sorry I never got a chance to comment right after!! Can't believe your next update will be your last, this story has been so original and amazing that it's blows the rest of the fanfics out of the water!!! I hope you write soon!!! ;D
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 11, 2006 13:29:58 GMT -5
I'm not so sure of that hydrokininis, but I glad that you really like it. And just the let you know the next update probably will not be the last, but it will be the third or second to last, or it may even darg on a little bit more. I thought about timing it out with the end of Charmed, on the night of the series finale when everyone would be online, Rapheal, and I so to speak could go out with a bang! And perhaps it would give the fans some reconciliation over the Charmed series coming to a close. I don't know exactly what I am going to do yet, but besure of one thing I plan for it to come to a good closure.
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Post by charmedcutie on Mar 11, 2006 22:38:00 GMT -5
I can't believe I have missed so much. I am almost finished but I just needed to say, you keep getting better with each passage. Looking forward to reading more.
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Post by prue on Mar 12, 2006 19:42:06 GMT -5
This is great! Can't wait for the rest! You are doing a great job!
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 12, 2006 21:36:19 GMT -5
Thank you all very much. I have decided to take a change on the story, and you will find out soon enough, a great woman gave me a spectacular idea. Let's this say I am going to change the scenery in the next update...
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 13, 2006 22:16:43 GMT -5
Well here we go folks a new update is NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"3 Witches and Holy Vampire Part 10" "Back on Earth I: Unnatural Disasters"
Back aboard Qualizato's space ship, Raphael called back to Raziel. A second later Raziel materialized in front of him. "What is wrong?" The Holy Vampire asked, sensing Raziel's distress. "You have not sensed it yet, with you absorbing the Hollow and the Nexus, but I have. Something is going on with Earth. Chaos is literally taking over. And I don't mean Chaos the incarnation, but mass pandemonium. It is worse than when the Titans tried to take over." Raphael using his own sensing ability suddenly sensed exactly what Raziel was talking about. Earth was being torn apart..... a repercussion caused by Chaos's resurrection. "I've got to go down there... the pain is too great." Raziel spoke truly feeling the pain of Earth's suffering. The Unseen Servant answered. "Yes, I can feel it too, and I agree, but I think you are needed here more." Raziel, drew back suddenly eyes blazing red. Raphael, suddenly sensed great anger coming from his companion. "You can try to stop me, and you probably could, but then you know as well as I do the entire universe may be doomed if you did try, especially Earth. And you as The Unseen Servant of God, Earth's greatest defender, that I am right." Raziel replied explaining his decision to go, but also expecting Raphael to understand. Raphael paused for a second sensing for the others, making sure they were alright before decided what to do. All was well with everyone, he could sense many demons and aliens dying by the second. "Go down to Earth and defend it as you did in my previous abscence. I apologize for not realizing that the primary duty is to take care of Earth. I will take care of what I need to here to defend Earth, and you take care of Earth itself." Raphael finished just as a horde of Xar heavily armed with their infamous laser blades appeared. Raziel looked to Raphael and smiled, Excalibur suddenly appearing in his hands. Raphael smiled back, Alpha Omega in his own. "You two, disarm, or be destroyed." A Xar commanded, as the drove continued to advance menacingly. They were in a circular area, near the center of the space ship and the Xar were closing in on that circle. Raphael placed Alpha Omega in his left hand, Raziel placed Excalibur in his right hand and the two locked open arms. They both then looked to the lieutenant, wide smiles on both their faces, eyes blazing, Raphael's green, Raziel's red. "You can come and try to do that, but I would not recommend it." Raziel spoke giving the Xar a fair chance to survive, although he knew they would not back down. "Yeah, I would take Raziel here up on his suggestion, before we make you all look like a bunch of dead fools." Apparently, Xar lieutenant did not want to believe them. "Kill them!" he commanded, and the Xar closed in laser blades waving. Raphael quickly spoke to Raziel, "As soon as this is over, and you and I both know it will be quite fast, get down to Earth quickly." Raziel nodded in agreement. The Xar closed in quickly, but not before Raphael and Raziel began to spin around and around their blades cutting in every possible direction. Within a span of a few seconds the first round of Xar lay mutilated in front and to the sides of the pair. More came on, combining their alien telepathic abilities to try to stop The Holy Vampire and Raziel, it slowed them down, but then the two suddenly split apart from one another, dividing the remaining Xar in half. A mere second later, the lieutenant remained alone, his division decimated. Raziel looked to Raphael, who looked back and nodded. Raziel disappeared down to Earth. Rapheal looked up at the lieutenant, eyes suddenly blazing white, devoid of any fear. And fear was exactly what the lieutenant felt as Raphael drew near. A fiery white holy fireball appeared in Raphael's right hand. The lieutenant sensed his doom. Raphael merely said, "I warned you..." And threw the holy ball of fire at Xar alien, destroying him utterly.
I hope you enjoyed that post, and as a writer I must give credit where credit is due. My girlfirend, hollypop, co-wrote this part with me and will co-write the next part with me as well. It will concern Raziel and what the planet Earth is experiencing due to the return of Chaos. Then I shall take you all back to the battle aboard Qualizto's spaceship.
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 14, 2006 0:11:26 GMT -5
Here it is the next update..
"3 Witches and A Holy Vampire Part 10.1" "Back on Earth II: Unnatural Disasters"
Raziel materialized above San Francisco, his great leathery wings flapping in the night. Once where the magnificent buildings of the great city once stood, they lay now in ruin. The smell of fear and great evil was here and Raziel easily sensed it.... He knew where Barbas and Zankou had gone too. They had come back to San Francisco where they could wreak havoc among the unprotected innocents. With the Charmed Ones out of the picture the city was obviously an easy target. Little did the two demons know that Raziel had come, he shielded himself purposely upon materializing knowing of their presence... ....And to their dismay they knew nothing of his... Raziel was on the hunt.... People fled about in sheer terror, their greatest fears come to life. Barbas laughed cruelly, turning to Zankou and speaking. "Fear, so much to expose, and so much time to relish in it." Zankou nodded in response, smiling that infamous Zankou smile. "Yes, we do seem to have free reign with the Charmed Ones out of the picture. Chaos will do what demons have been trying to accomplish for so long, destroy the sisters." Barbas feeling out exactly what Zankou had in mind replied. "What of The Unseen Servant, he is the one who shall challenge Chaos, perhaps even destroy him. Is that not your greatest fear, Zankou?" Barbas slyly asked, not letting on that even as powerful as Zankou was, Barbas could even read his greatest fear. Zankou, never underestimating, any demon, especially one of Barbus's caliber answered. "So, you can read even my greatest fear? How disappointing it must be for you to be wrong. However, thank you for proving the fact that you are no longer needed." Zankou then formed an energy ball and threw it at the surprised Demon of Fear, vanquishing him, and sending him once more back to the Wasteland." Zankou took his trademark breath of triumph and turned around to admire the destruction, thinking what his next move would be. He took a step back, triumph abruptly turned to confusion because what was suddenly in front of him was unlike any being he had ever seen. "Not exactly expecting me, were you Zankou." Raziel spoke his wings folding out in the air, his gray halo floating above his head, and his demonic side in control atthe moment, anxious for a fight. "What exactly are you? Wait no matter, I sense that you have the ability to do great evil, the same as I, we can rule this pitiful planet together." Zankou sensing Raziel's great energy tried to coax the half breed into joining him. Zankou continued, "The power you possess what a waste it would be not to put it to good use. We could be allies." Zankou extended his right hand to shake with Raziel, while he held his left, slyly behind his back forming an energy ball. Raziel extended forth his hand to, but suddenly Excalibur materialized, and he swooped toward Zankou stabbing straight through his chest. "I see what you do so allies, like you did to Barbus. Give him my regards in the Wasteland." Zankou exploded in a fiery vanquish. Raziel looked around at the devastion caused by not only Barbas and Zankou, but by Chaos's return. He was crushed, there were still millions out there in fear and pain. Falling to one knee, overwhelmed, Raziel truly did not know what to do next. A familiar and soothing voice came into Raziel's mind. It was his father, Michael's. "Take heart, son, once Raphael destroys Chaos, everything will go back to the way it was before. Do what you can to help on Earth, we will take care of the evil up here until you return." Raziel, guided by the wisdom of his father's words rose, his confidence returning. "Thank you, father. I will do what I can to aid Earth." Raziel sent back the message telepathically, as he wiped away the one single tear that managed to escape his usual stoic demeanor.
I hope you enjoyed that update as well the last one. Holly really helped me out a lot with these last two updates, so give her credit too. Till next time...to be continued...
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 14, 2006 10:43:07 GMT -5
The next update will consist of a go between-what Raziel sees and experiences on Earth, and the battle aboard Qualizto's space ship. Stay tuned...
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Post by ~Empath~ on Mar 14, 2006 11:29:45 GMT -5
This is absolutely amazing...can't wait until the next update!
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Post by hydrokinisis on Mar 14, 2006 20:45:30 GMT -5
I love them both, your story just continues to have an epic feeling!!! ;D
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 14, 2006 21:13:56 GMT -5
Thanks Empath, wish more people would comment though. That's alright people are reading the story as it unfolds....and it unfolds some more NOW!
"3 Witches and Holy Vampire Part 10.2" "Raziel on Earth/Battle In Space"
Raziel teleported from various places on Earth, to estimate the destruction. And, indeed it was catastrophic. It was something beyond his own wildest imagination. The only thing he could even begin to compare it to was when the Titans nearly took over the Earth three thousand years ago. Except this time it was much worse, Chaos, The Ultimate Evil, was the cause. The half breed was now in Rome where unexpectedly a tornado shot down from the dismal clouds that had suddenly gathered in the sky. Raziel took immediate flight straight toward the twister and reached it before it made contact with the ground. His energy picked up dramactically and he circled around the tornado, in the opposite direction, spinning faster and faster, eventually reaching the quickest speed of all: the speed of thought. The tornado shot back up into the clouds from where it had been wrought and dissapated. Raziel came to an immediate halt. More tornadoes would follow if he did not dispatch the funnel clouds. And he had the perfect spell in mind, a powerful spell to erase matter itself from existence. The half demon, half angel looking at the clouds began to chant, "Uto' moren do' senta rendar, futar minto artar detro!" He finished. The funnel clouds crumpled inward, their matter erased. Raziel blew a sigh of relief, he knew he had just saved thousands down below, and it felt good. He teleported down to Rome, which was one of the last cities that was still standing. He looked up and seen a sign that meant to have hope. A single white dove flew through the air, quite gracefully, and it even looked back at Raziel, seeming to tell him not to lose hope. It flew onward out of the half breeds sight but his hope had been rekindled. Sensing something was about to materialize, Raziel was about to call Excalibur, but he sensed good energy not evil. A whitelighter, by the name of Aster, orbed in, directly in front of Raziel. "The Elders have sent me to you, your father has given them specific instructions to aid you, thus available whitelighters as well as a few Elders have been dispatched to Earth, to heal those in need." Aster explained looking up and down at what was once considered a freak of nature, at Raziel. "What, not exactly what you expected, huh?" Raziel asked looking down directly at Aster. Aster gulped, "Not exactly, you are half demon." "Yes, this is true, but I am also half angel too." Raziel smiled hoping to calm the whitelighter's nervousness. Raziel sensed something else coming to and it was not good, it was evil, and it was not after him it was after Aster. "Quickly, do as I say." Raziel commanded, to which Aster nodded. "When I say duck, do it." A darklighter, not able to sense Raziel's presence black orbed in right behind Aster, crossbow in hand and fired. "Duck!" Raziel spoke, to which Aster ducked, and not a moment to soon, as the darklighter's arrow shot straight over his head, directly at Raziel. Raziel plucked it out of the air as if it were a feather falling. Suddenly, the darklighter, seeing Raziel had a quick change of his black heart. He attempted to black ord back out, but Raziel was even quicker. He grabbed the black orbs causing the darklighter to rematerialize instantly. "You did not expect me huh, darklighter?" Raziel asked lifting the darklighter off the ground a few feet with a single muscled arm, in a choke hold. The darklighter choked, "Not exactly. You are the one that is of both light and dark, the one born of angels and demons. Vanquish me, then you are well beyond my power." "You think I am going to vanquish you, not what I had in mind." Raziel smiled evilly. "You are going to deliver a message to the rest of the demons in the underworld for me. They come to Earth, and they will be sent to the Wasteland, by me. I am banishing you to the underworld, permanately. And you will deliver my message, or I will send you to some place worse than even the Wasteland, do you understand?" Raziel threatened, his eyes aflame looking directly into the darklighter's eyes. Raziel knew without a doubt the darklighter would do exactly as he was instructed to do, he sensed pure fear coming from him. The message would be delivered, any demons on Earth would be sent to the Wasteland. Suddenly, a grayish energy rose up through Raziel's arm and enveloped the darklighter, who dissapted...banished back to the underworld for all eternity. Raziel turned to face the astonished Aster. "You saved my life, as well as the lives of all the whitelighters down here on Earth by what you just did, I am grateful. Please forgive for judging you early, you truly are good, despite what your heritage may be." Aster lowered his head ashamed. "Perk up whitelighter, we have a job to do. All of you whitelighters and Elders heal those in need, I'll try to contain all the unnatural disaters, to prevent more from being hurt and killed. And your are forgiven, now go do your job, I have my own to do." Raziel answered smiling as Aster inspired by Raziel's words did indeed perk up and orbed out. Raziel let out a sigh, "Whitelighters they always seem to need guidance themselves." He then too took off teleporting toward where he detected the greatest of all the unnatural disasters. A gargantuan hurricane that had developed in the Pacific Ocean. And Raziel had every intention of stopping it as well, remembering the white dove, he suddenly wondered how his friends were faring out in space. Good, he hoped, as the dove had inspired him too.
Aboard Qualizato's spaceship the battle continued to rage on. Phoebe still battled herself, which she found quite unnerving, but she was beginning to adjust. She had her own magical blade drawn, but every move she made Zulato seemed to counter, as if he were her reflection, and indeed he was except he was evil. "Just surrender Phoebe, you cannot beat me. I am your greatest fear come to life, and your evil reflection, that's why I counter your every move. Your mind is clouded with the fear that is within you, you cannot move fast enough to strike me down." Zulato laughed evilly, coming in with his own great laser blade flashing as he went for a downward thrust, which was a mere feint, he quickly twisted his blade upward, truly thinking he had Phoebe finally defeated. To his ultimate dismay, Phoebe's holy blade parried his. "WHAT! That should have been your end." Zulato exclaimed in anger. "Thanks for reminding me about a lesson I was recently taught about letting go. Now it is your end." Phoebe then moved at the speed of thought cutting at that impossible speed, cutting away at every possible angle, Zulato's laser blade itself cut to pieces. Zulato, stunned began to back away, but it was too late. Phoebe's magical blade cut like a spinning fan into the alien. Phoebe cut her evil self completely apart. The alien that once had assumed Phoebe's evil form, once again assumed his own....in pieces.
Paige grew more nervous as the bats closed in around her. Her claustrophobia was affecting her even as a goddess. She had to overcome this, she had when she had her first encounter with Barbus, why not now? A great shield suddenly flared to life as Paige stood up. The bats that came into contact with the Holy Shield were utterly destroyed, much to the Vampire Queen's dismay. "My children!" She exclaimed in sudden fury. "What have you done!?" Paige responded, "I have destroyed them, as I will with the rest, as I will with you." The Vampire Queen in her arrogance replied, "You may be a goddess, but that shield will not defend you forever. Beside's just imagine what power you would gain if you allowed me to bite you. You would become a vampire goddess." She finished reverting back to her early tactics to try to convince Paige to turn evil. She looked down and Paige was no longer there. "What!" The Queen exclaimed. "Bite this." Paige answered holy fireball in her hand and then she threw it at the Vampire Queen, vanquishing her and the rest of her brood instantly. "You know, " Cole said, "I told her the exact same thing when I vanquished her the first time around." Paige looked over at Cole, and despite their past answered. "How are you doing?" "Good," Cole answered forming two fireballs and throwing them at two quickly approaching Xar, destroying them. "These Xar are quite relentless though. I am going to check on Phoebe, good luck." Cole then dematerialized.
Raphael sensed the others were still well, and then he stepped through the portal to rejoin his other half, and to once again destroy Chaos. He did not know what exactly lay on the other side, but it did not matter. The fate of Earth, as well as the entire universe was on his shoulders.
Leo was shooting off lightning bolts after lightning bolts killing many Xar. He was trying to work his way to Piper, but the Xar seemed endless. He kept hope however that Piper could take care of herself, and he would find her soon enough. He continued frying more Xar, and the occasional demon, battling his way through Qualizato's maze like space ship.
Gabriel and Micheal had finally located it. The source of the ships power. Piles of Xar bodies circled it as well. It was in the exact shape as the ship, and it was pure black, emanating black light. "So, Gabriel, any ideas on how to destroy this thing. I think it is going to take the both of us?" Micheal asked looking over to his angelic female companion. "I agree." Gabriel replied. The two seraphs energy levels picked up dramatically as they prepared to shatter the source of the ships power.
Piper could not believe what she saw. Her eyes had to decieve her, it simply could not be. What stood in front of her now was an impossibility, but Piper wanted so bad to believe in it. Standing in front of Piper...was ....Prue!!! "Prue..." Piper said tears in her eyes. "Yes, Piper I have come to help you." The alien known as Balizato, Qual's twin brother smiled wickedly......
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Post by hydrokinisis on Mar 14, 2006 21:36:58 GMT -5
WOW, 3 new updates in one night!!! Your on a role, and their all great updates!!!
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Post by ~Empath~ on Mar 14, 2006 22:20:47 GMT -5
jmasonii, you've done it again!!! I would love to co-write something with you, you are very talented!!!! Or maybe you could help co-write my next project..."Charmed: The Next Generation". This story is so good, keep it Up!!!! I cannot wait until the next update. And Hollypop great job helping jmasonii!!
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 15, 2006 0:14:24 GMT -5
I have finished my most recent update go to page nine, at the end!
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 15, 2006 11:46:48 GMT -5
I sincerely hope that everyone is enjoying this story. It is turning out well, I think, better than even I expected it too, and quite a deal longer too!! Remember to give credit to the lovely hollypop, she has helped me out with the last 3 posts!!!! Next update....coming soon to a cafe near you!
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Post by jmasonii on Mar 15, 2006 22:18:46 GMT -5
This following update is going to be the first round Raphael against Chaos. Sorry gals and guys you will have to wait for the next update to find out what happens to the others "3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 11" "Raphael vs. Chaos Round 1" Raphael found it quite strange as he entered the other side of the portal to see his other half battling with Chaos, who did not even bother to turn into his true form. As soon as Chaos felt the other Raphael's presence he kicked the Raphael he had been battling with in the chest blasting him away. He then teleported down to the other Raphael, the one who had just absorbed both the Nexus and the Hollow. "Decided to join yourself in defeat. Face it Raphael there is not any chance for you to beat me this time. I am in the body of one of the strongest creatures in existence. Qualizato's own powers were near god-like, and combined with my own, they are even beyond that. You don't stand a chance." Chaos spoke arrogantly, forgetting about the other Raphael who materialized behind him. Chaos had suspected that move however, and teleported back behind the second half of the Unseen Servant. Raphael's feint had worked, the two halves smiled at one another, and joined together. Blinding white light emanated from the spot where they joined, and even Chaos had to shield his eyes. It slowly dissapated, and where once two exact clones of The Unseen Servant stood, there was one, and his eyes glowed the bright white. He materialized his greatest battle gear, through the dimensional portal that still lay open, else he might not have been able to do so. His breast plate, the one with the emblem of the phoenix glowed a fiery red. Raphael had what appeared to be be cape on as well, except it as not exactly a cape. It was the famous Shroud of Turin, the greatest defensive armor in existence. On his gauntlet encased forearms he had his other symbol, the Septagram Sun encased with various magical jewels, that performed different functions. However, despite all the armor he had on the greatest difference from when he had fought Chaos the first time was he was merely The Unseen Servant of God a title he still kept, but since that time after he was ressurected, he was given the greatest of all rewards. He had become the incarnation of the third part of the Holy Trinity, Holy Spirit. Alpha Omega appeared in The Holy Vampire's hands. Chaos seemed unimpressed laughing and muttering an ancient spell. The portal door suddenly closed. "Now that you are at full strength, and I am, let us decide the fate of the entire universe." Chaos laughed evilly, his own blade, made of the purest dark matter imaginable appearing in his hands. "Why not..." Raphael replied hearing enough talk from his greatest nemesis. The two suddenly came together their swords immediately interlocking. They looked at one another directly in the eyes. Raphael's blazing white, Chaos's the purest black. "Give up, now and I promise to destroy you and the rest of the universe quickly." Chaos commanded, to which Raphael merely shook his head in the utmost disagreement. He immediately spun to the right swinging his most magnificent blade to Chaos left side. Chaos swung at the same time as The Unseen Servant, but his sword bounced off The Shroud of Turin. He didn't have time to parry, and he knew it, Raphael like him could move at the speed of thought. He did the only thing he could do before Alpha Omega connected with his torso. He became insubstantial and the Holy Vampire's blade passed on through. Chaos came to realize quickly that this battle was not going to be like the one earlier with only one half of Raphael, in which he dominated. In fact, he could have ultimately destroyed that side of Raphael, but in his arrogance he chose not too. He wanted to battle Raphael at full strength, and it seemed he got his wish as he became substanial once more. Swords collided in rapid succession, neither opponent on the offensive or defensive, but somewhere in between. The ultimate fight for the entire universe had begun, and it was far from over. Raphael and Chaos drew back from one another, after what seemed an hour of spectacular swordplay, and indeed it was nothing short of specatacular. They could go on for eternity....literally. The Unseen Servant looked down and saw a minor cut on his shoulder. Chaos too looked on and spoke. "First blood is mine." The Ultimate Evil laughed. "Yes, that may be true, but first blood is not nearly important as the last..." Raphael replied smiling, and the two came together once more. Neither gained the upper hand, nor would at least not for awhile. Indeed this battle could play out for all eternity...but both opponents had every intention of it not too.... Hope you liked. Like I posted in the beginning the next part I will go back to Raziel on Earth, and the others on the spaceship, and continue with this epic battle.... Blessed be!
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