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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 23, 2006 16:47:35 GMT -5
Hey guys, it's my first Fan Fic for Charmed so bear with me here. I hope that I can do justice to Charmed. This Fic is going to deal with the Season Finale that I would like to see based on everything that has happened this season. Hope you enjoy and I will be posting the Teaser and the First Act Right now! It's a two-parter and it's called "The End Power of Three, Parts One and Two". In this, it is assumed that the Girls know the Triad is after Christy. Just to give people a little *mini* teaser of what's going on, The title: "The End Power of Three" has two very deep meanings and tied to the episode. The End of the power of three (take that anyway you want to....) and The End Power of Three, like Endgame's in a spy things. What the true power of three can do. So without futher ado...enjoy!
One Hope You Enjoy the Fic Empath
PREVIOUSLY (Paige) ON (Phoebe) CHARMED (Piper): (Narrated Equally By Paige, Phoebe and Piper) Clips from 1.01- Something Wicca This Way Comes When Phoebe is reading the incantation to give them their powers and a mini-clip with Kit. Clip from 3.22- All Hell Breaks Loose When Prue and Piper get hit by Shax’s engry ball. Clip from 4.01- Charmed Again, Part One When Piper and Phoebe meet Paige at Prue’s Funeral. Clips from 8.01- Still Charmed and Kicking and 8.02- Malice in Wonderland when we first meet Billie Clips from 8.10- Vaya Con Leos when Leo is on his Death Bed and When Piper is crying and everyone else’s face when they freeze Leo. Also, when the Angel of Destiny tells TCO’s that they have to face a great Evil. Clips from 8.15- The Last Temptation of Christy When Christy says “They’re Coming”, When Henry gets hit by a fire ball and Paige says two-inches close, Henry would have died, when the Demons call Christy “The Key” when new Triad at the end says “She’s in Place”, and when Henry Proposes to Paige. Clip from 4.13- Charmed and Dangerous when Paige, Phoebe and Piper Vanquish The Source Clips from 7.22- Something Wicca This Way Goes when they Vanquish Zankou and when they stand over the book saying “The Power of Three Will Set Us Free”
TEASER:
The episode opens with Billie and the Charmed Ones in the underworld. Billie is running and chasing after a demon that has been shimmering away from them. The Demon shimmers out and then they stop to take a break.
Piper: That’s the third demon we haven’t been able to catch.
Phoebe: Maybe we should go back to the Book and summon Demons.
Paige: We’ve tried the defensive and it’s gotten us nowhere.
Phoebe: Yeah and we’ve tried this and it’s gotten us nowhere also.
Billie: You guys, let’s just split up, Piper can go with me, and Paige and Phoebe go together that way we can cover more ground.
Phoebe: Sounds like a plan to me, I got to get back to work, giving that good ol’ advice.
Piper: Can we just focus on the task at hand Phoebe?
Phoebe gives Piper a disapproving look.
Paige: Ok, we’re going to go to the other side of the Underworld. You guys call if you need an helping orb.
Billie: Sure…
Phoebe takes Paige’s hand and the two orb out. Just as they orb out the demon from before shimmers in and the camera focus on him setting something down.
Billie: (hitting Piper) Piper, there he is, freeze him.
Piper: Ok, calm your nerves already.
Piper then freezes the demon, Billie then runs over to the frozen demon and steps in front of him. Piper then unfreezes his head.
Billie: Though we all went away in orbs didn’t ya?
Piper: Just get him to talk.
Billie: Where is the Triad?
Demon: Wouldn’t you like to know.
Billie: Look, quit the games, I don’t have time for the demon tough guy attitude. Tell me where the Triad is.
Demon: Die Witch!
Billie out of frustration guts the demon with an athame.
Piper: What'd you do that for?
Billie: He wasn't going to give away information.
Piper: Well...you could have gave him so time.
Billie: I don't have time ok, the Triad has my sister under this mind-control thing and I have to save her. I don't have time to lose, I have to find them and Vanquish them.
Piper: Look, I understand you wanting to save your sister, but you have to be a little bit patient when it comes to demons, you know, give them a little bit of torture.
Billie registers this and then turns around and walks back towards Piper. Just as she does the item the demon put down when he shimmered in glows. Piper sees this.
Piper: What’s that glowing thing?
Billie: What glowing thing?
Piper: Right there where you killed the demon.
Billie then turns around and sees what Piper has seen. She then uses her telekinetic abilities to make the glowing item come to her. Once she gets it in her hand, a glow goes around her neck.
Billie: Whoa what just happened?
Piper: Well I don’t know, the glow thingy went around your neck.
Billie: What is it?
Piper then looks at the thing that went around her neck, instantly recognizing it. Billie catches the surprise and concerned look on Piper’s face.
Billie: So…what is it?
Piper: Our coven’s symbol.
Billie: What?
Piper: The Triquetra.
The Camera then focuses on the necklace with the Triquetra around Billie’s neck.
FADE OUT OPENING CREDITS
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 23, 2006 18:05:21 GMT -5
ACT I-
INT- Halliwell Manor - Attic – Day
Paige and Billie are at the Book of Shadows, Piper and Phoebe are making potions at the potions table.
Billie: So what did you guys find out in your neck of the Underworld?
Phoebe: Let’s see…nothing we didn’t already know.
Paige: All the demons we encountered just kept saying “You don’t want to mess with the Triad” “The Triad is bad news” and that type of stuff.
Piper: But we vanquished Triad when Prue was alive. And they were no real threat. I mean they sent Cole In who almost killed us.
Phoebe: Actually Cole vanquished the Triad.
Paige: The Bottom Line is the Triad has been vanquished, but why are they so powerful now?
Piper: I have no clue, but I hope their this Big Bad were supposed to face so that the Angel of Destiny can hold up her end of the bargain.
Phoebe: Where are the boys?
Piper: At Dad’s House
Paige: And Christy?
Billie: Locked in a crystal cage in Phoebe’s room so she can’t hurt anyone.
Paige: Good.
Phoebe then looks a Billie’s Neck and notices the Triquetra.
Phoebe: Is that the Triquetra?
Billie: This…
Billie tries to take it off her neck.
Billie: This…this is something I can’t seem to get off my neck.
Piper: How’s that?
Billie: I don’t know, I keep pulling it (still trying to pull it off) and it won’t come off.
Billie then pulls her hand from her neck and tries to telekinetically pull it off. She puts little strength and gradually increases but then she all of a sudden applies near full power and throws herself across the room.
Paige: Couch!
Paige orbs the couch to where Billie should land.
Billie: (frazzled) Did it come off?
Phoebe: (laughing) No it didn’t.
Paige: Let Me Try. Necklace.
Orbs circle around the necklace but then fade away. The Necklace is still across Billie’s Neck.
Paige: Necklace.
Piper: I don’t think powers are working on it?
Phoebe: Let’s try a spell: Object from an unknown place, Remove you now from this space.
Billie: Nothing.
Paige: Maybe the Power of Three?
Phoebe: For a necklace?
Piper: It’s worth a try.
Piper, Phoebe and Paige: Object from an unknown place, The Power of Three removes you now from this space.
Billie: Still nothing.
Paige: Where did this necklace come from exactly?
Piper: When we were battling the demon we were chasing after.
Paige: He came back?
Piper: I guess he sensed that you guys orbed away and thought we all went away.
Phoebe: Yeah, but that still doesn’t explain the necklace and why it won’t come off of Billie’s neck.
Piper: I don’t know, I just saw something glowing after Billie prematurely vanquished the demon.
Billie: And then I telekinetically brought it too me, and then the glow went around my neck and there was the necklace.
Phoebe: But why didn’t we notice it before.
Piper: Maybe we weren’t paying attention.
Billie: Or maybe the demon planted it. He seemed like a low level demon to me, so he couldn’t have sensed that you guys had orbed away. Maybe he planted it for one of you to receive but I accidentally picked it up. Maybe like a warning sign or something.
Phoebe: But that would mean that he had to be working for somebody.
Piper: Like the Triad.
Paige: Ok, this could be a lead here.
Phoebe: Maybe we could use the necklace to scry for a location.
Billie: But how I can’t get the necklace off of my neck.
Phoebe: That means you have to scry with it, you’re obviously connected it too it since it won’t come off.
Piper: Paige come help me make potions, Phoebe create a power of three spell just in case, and Billie start scrying.
Just as Piper is giving out orders, both Phoebe and Paige’s phone ring. Both of them answer at the same time. Paige: Hello
Phoebe: Hello
Paige: Henry, I’m kinda tied up with demon’s here.
Phoebe: Elise, I have a family emergency
Paige: No you can’t come help Henry, right now we’re look for the really scary demons.
Phoebe: I know, Elise, I’ll just work from home like I always do.
Paige: Henry...
Phoebe: Elise...
Paige: Henry, I’ll be there as soon as I’m done demon hunting.
Phoebe: Elise, I’ll be there as soon as I’m done with my family emergency.
Paige: Promise…
Phoebe: Promise…
Paige: I Love You.
Phoebe: I Love You (realizing what she just said and hearing what Elise is saying)Ok. Ok....Thanks Elise!
Piper: Ok, now that everyone’s life is on hold, let’s get to work.
Billie is sitting down scrying for the location and Phoebe walks over and pulls the paper and pen over to her that is right by the map. Paige walks over to the potion table and helps Piper mix potions.
CUT TO: INT- Demonic Cave – Eternal Night
The Triad are in the Cave saying some kind of incantation. Seleth walks in while they are doing the chant.
Asmodeus: Yes, Seleth.
Seleth: Everything is going according to plan.
Dreylock: And the Witches?
Seleth: Are probably scrying for the location as we speak.
Java: Good. Be ready to get the girl once they come. She’ll be waiting for you.
Seleth: Yes Master.
Asmodeus: Let us imbue you with enough power to break through the crystal cage they have put on her.
Seleth then walks into the middle of the three. They then raise their hands and say another incantation. Their hands glow a dark aura and then they point their hands towards Seleth. Seleth is then taking in the power the Triad is giving him.
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INT- Halliwell Manor – Phoebe’s Room – Day
Billie walks in and goes next to the crystal cage that Christy is locked in.
Billie: Christy, I going to go, are you going to be ok?
Christy: LEAVE!
Billie: Christy.
Christy: I said LEAVE!
Billie: I’m going to vanquish the sorry asses who have control over you?
Christy: (sarcastically) Good Luck. (she then starts to laugh).
Billie then gets up and walks out into the hall and meets the sisters coming down stairs from the attic.
Paige: How's she doing?
Billie: She hates me
Phoebe: No she doesn't
Billie: I know it's demon mind control mojo, but the real Christy has to be in there somewhere. Right?
Phoebe: Honey, we're going to save your sister.
Piper: Ready to do this?
Billie: Ready.
Paige then takes Billie’s hand and everyone Piper and Phoebe grab on to the appropriate hands and Paige orbs them down to the Underworld.
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INT- Demonic Cave – Eternal Night
The Triad are still giving Seleth enough power to take down the crystal cage to take Christy. The Triad then hear demons being vanquished and the stop, knowing Seleth has been given enough power to do what he is supposed to do.
Asmodeus: Go.
Seleth then shimmers away.
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INT- Demonic Cave #2 – Eternal Night
Billie and the Charmed Ones are throwing potions at the Demons vanquish them. Piper is freezing Demons who she thinks will talk. Demons are throwing fireballs towards Paige and she’s deflecting them with her TK Orb. Phoebe is kicking Butt Martial Arts Style and Billie is using her telekinesis.
Billie: We just made a lot of demons go poof.
Phoebe: This Must be where the Triad’s headquarters are.
Billie: So what will we do.
Paige: They probably know that we are here. So we call them out to us.
Billie: How?
Piper: With Them.
Piper then unfreezes the head of the demons that she froze while they were vanquishing the others.
Piper: Start talking or I start blowing off some body parts.
Demon #1: You’ll never get us to talk.
Piper: See, you just go and get snippy with me.
Piper then blows off his arm. The Demon then screams in Pain.
Piper: You want to loose more.
Demon #2: Tell them, there’s nothing the can do to stop them now anyways.
Phoebe: Tell us what.
Demon #2: That right now, “The Key” is being taken as we speak.
Phoebe: You’re bluffing.
Demon #2: I would bet your life on it.
Billie: Paige, quick orb me home.
Paige: Not by yourself.
Billie: I can handle it, she’s my sister, plus I got two kick a$$ powers.
Paige: Call if you need us. Home!
Paige then orbs Billie back to the Manor.
Piper: Now tell us where the Triad is.
Demon #1: Send me to the wasteland, cause I ain’t talking no more.
Phoebe: This is going to get us nowhere.
Piper: Like I told Billie. Just be patient (getting a little fierce)
Piper then Blows the Demon’s other arm off. The Demon #1 Screams in more Pain.
Piper: Now…let’s try this again. Where is the Triad?
Asmodeus: Am I who you looking for?
The Girls then put on a surprise but ready look
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INT- Halliwell Manor – Phoebe’s Room – Day
Seleth is there and it seems as though he’s absorbing the power of the cage. After he absorbs the whole cage we see Christy stand up.
Christy: Sure took you long enough. Let’s go.
Seleth: Wait.
Billie then orbs into the room.
Billie: Christy!
Seleth: Now!
Christy eyes go gray and Billie start to scream in Pain.
Billie: (in pain) Christy…you’re hurting me.
Christy then brings Billie down to her knees.
Billie: (in more pain) AHHHH!!! Christy, fight it, I'm your sister! AHH!!!!!
Billie, who is not able to take the pain collapses. Seleth then goes over and Picks Billie up.
Seleth: Let’s Go.
Christy grabs Selelth’s Hand and shimmers out.
END ACT I
So....any questions. I know it seems to be very predictable at the moment. But trust me, you won't see whats coming. Plus this is just Part I just wait to both parts come together. So if you have any question...ask away!
One Finished Act I! Empath...
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 24, 2006 11:54:33 GMT -5
Here is ACT II....ENJOY!!!
ACT II-
INT- Demonic Cave – Eternal Night
The Charmed Ones are ready to take down Asmodeus and you see them clutching their potions and Piper getting ready to fire
Asmodeus: So, The Big Good Charmed Ones came to take down the Big Bad Triad.
Phoebe: You know your pretty cocky for an about to dead demon.
Asmodeus: And you are very mistaken if you think you’re going to take me out.
Phoebe throws a potion bottle and it just stings Asmodeus
Asmodeus: Did you really think I’d come in person?
Paige: What, scared of a couple of witches.
Asmodeus: But remember, you’re not just any witches. You are The Charmed Ones. From the Line of Melina Warren, the most powerful good witch the magic world has ever seen.
Piper: And what does that have to do with squat.
Asmodeus: This is a warning, to you, give up now or be prepared to face something you’ve never faced before.
Piper: Ha…if we listened to every scary big bad that came along, we’d really be dead right now.
Asmodeus: Is that how you feel Piper. Always wanted a normal life, but yet never got the chance to have one. Leo’s gone, and won’t come back…such a pity. Phoebe, the lover of Demon’s, Drake, Cole…I still think you would have made a great queen for the underworld. You had so much potential. And Paige…the outcast sister that wasn’t even heard of until Prue croaked.
Piper begins to blow him up, but Phoebe holds her hands back
Asmodeus: Sorry, I know how testy you girls get when I talk about Prue
Phoebe: Ok, so we’ve established that you know a lot about us. So you wanna have a tea party or something, invite the rest of the Triad for a little chit chat. (becoming furious)
Asmodeus: Look at the time, I have a whole underworld and world to take over. But do keep in touch.
Piper: When we find you and vanquish your sorry excuse for demon asses, do know that you definitely had it coming.
Asmodeus: Until then…
Asmodeus then shimmers away and Piper then blows up the rest of the Demons
Paige: Billie!
Phoebe: Oh, no…we forgot about her.
Piper: Let’s get home
Paige grabs Piper and Phoebe’s hand and they orb from the cave
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INT- Halliwell Manor – Hallway –Day
Paige, Phoebe and Piper Orb in to the Hallway.
Phoebe: Billie…
Phoebe then runs to her old room where Christy had been kept
Paige: We fell for it.
Piper: Another trap
Paige: But why didn’t we see it? We’ve faced worse.
Phoebe returns from her old room
Phoebe: Christy is gone.
Paige: And we sent Billie back when we were being distracted, so she’s gone too.
Phoebe: We have to get her back
Piper: But she was basically our scrying tool, that’s how we found the cave.
Phoebe: I have a feeling the Triad will have us find them when they want us too.
Paige: So we just sit back and wait?
Piper: It’s all we can do.
Paige: That’s a lie and we know it, we have defeated evil on plenty occasions, not to mention The Source and Zankou, two of the most powerful demons anyone has ever faced. So don’t tell me that’s all we can do for Billie, for Christy (to Piper) for Leo. Our ancestors fought for the greater good and that’s what we have to do now.
Phoebe: Yes, our ancestors fought and look where they are now.
Paige: Phoebe…
Phoebe: Paige…what do you want us to do?
Paige: Well for one, I would want you to care Phoebe, all you’ve been doing is caring about your condo, your advice column and the insane baby vision that hasn’t happened in two years, it’s been PhoeMe, PhoeMe, PhoeMe, ever since Leo has left.
Phoebe: What about you and Henry, married life, don’t talk about my selfishness, I have put a lot into this destiny of mine and now I’m supposed to stop living just because this Big Bad.
Paige: The Big Bad that we don’t even see coming, who seems to be playing around with us right now, and the Big Bad that might finally defeat us. Yeah, that’s the greatest reason to live.
Phoebe: My point exactly.
Paige: I was making an couter-agrument
Phoebe: May I add, not a very good one.
Piper: STOP! Neither one of you have even contributed a little to helping me find Leo, I ask for help and the both of you have your own separate lives and I can’t even get a you to give me a d**n premonition Phoebe, and Paige, you couldn’t even call some of those frizzy fairy friends you have, so if I have my say you both are two selfish, little…
In The Background, you hear someone chime in
Grams: Can I get in on this argument?
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INT- Demonic Cave – Eternal Night
Seleth and his minions are setting up altars and things that the Triad will need to complete what they want to complete. You then see Christy come out with a Black robe with a pentagram on the front. Dreylock then takes her hand and moves her into the middle of the Circle.
Java: Seleth, is everything set up.
Seleth: Almost master.
Java: Good.
Seleth: Do you want the girl here yet?
Dreylock: Not yet, not to everything is set into place, we can’t afford to any chaos for our plan to work.
Seleth: What about the Charmed Ones?
Asmodeus: (not on camera but you can hear his voice) I have taken care of them.
Dreylock: There will be no time for interruptions.
Asmodeus: Trust me, they are well taken care of.
Java: Did we learn anything new.
Asmodeus: Yes, they are distracted from their own lives and are left vulnerable by being separate.
Seleth: Shouldn’t we take advantage of this?
Asmodeus: In time, we will. But right now we have to put out focus on something that will really take The Charmed Ones out.
A demon is coming from another part of the cave and he whispers something into Seleth’s ear.
Seleth: Master, the girl is waking up. What should we do?
Asmodeus: Key!
Christy: Yes, master. Asmodeus: Go take care of your sister.
Christy: As you wish.
Christy then gets up from where she was and leaves out with Seleth and his minion.
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INT- Halliwell Manor – Attic – Day
The girls are all sitting on the couch while Grams is standing at the book, looking at it but not really studying it
Grams: What is wrong my darlings.
The girls sit on the couch, quiet, not knowing what to really say
Grams: Well, somebody answer me.
Phoebe: Who called for you Grams? I’m pretty sure none of us did.
Grams: No one called me. I sensed the Power of Three was close to breaking so I came to see why? (the girls still are quiet) Is anybody going to tell me why?
Piper: Have you heard anything about A Great Evil in the afterlife.
Grams: No, not really.
Piper: Well, that seems to be the greatest thing on my agenda right now, beat this evil so that I can get my husband back.
Grams: Piper…
Piper: Grams, I know you came down here to see what’s going on, but there’s nothing you can really say right now to comfort us. You can’t tell us that this is our destiny. That we should stick together and we should fight the good fight. We know this and frankly, we’re tired of fighting and everyone telling us to fight. I just want my husband back and then screw destiny.
Grams: Piper…
Phoebe: No Grams. She’s right. For eight years we have fought a massive amount of evil, and you’d think we’d get kudos for defeating the most power demons that ever existed. You’d think we’d finally be able to live without worrying and be able to sleep at night without worrying about the demon who’s going to finally kill us.
Paige: But yet we still have to fight
Grams face starts to sadden up, she then lets tears fall from her eyes
Grams: Paige, help me out here.
Paige: I’ve been trying to convince myself and them of the same things but what they’re saying is starting to make a lot of sense.
Grams: Girls…I know that it’s been hard…but this is your…
Piper: Destiny…Grams, a funny thing happened when Leo died. The Angel of Destiny told me that it was his Destiny to die, not because it was his time, not because he was evil and he needed to pay, but because of our “Destiny”. Leo was taken way from us because we fight evil. The Love of my Life and the Father of my Children was taken away all because of this screwed “Destiny” we have. So don’t tell me about this Destiny cause you know what….I’ve had it.
Piper gets up from the couch and starts walking away
Grams: Where are you going?
Piper: To try to spend the last time I’ll probably ever have with my boys.
Phoebe and Paige also get up from the couch
Grams: Phoebe, Paige…
Paige: Grams, I understand but we have to do this, live before we die.
Grams: What do you mean?
Phoebe: The Angel of Destiny said we might not be alive after this fight.
Grams puts her hand on her face, worried and scared for the girls lives, her eyes are still teary
Grams: Good Luck my darlings. Do you what feel you have to do. And don’t forget, The Power of Three will set you free.
Piper, Phoebe and Paige look back, taking in Grams words. Grams then goes away.
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INT- Demonic Cave – Eternal Night. We see Christy standing over Billie using her powers to make Billie scream out in Pain. She seems to be scanning Billie’s mind for something.
Billie: (in enormous pain) Christy…stop, I’m your…I’m your sister.
Seleth: She doesn’t even know who you are anymore, Witch. She’s one of us now.
Billie: (faintly) No.
Seleth: Yes
Billie: (faintly) I will save you Christy…I promise.
Seleth smiles evily as Java walks in and Billie faints again.
Seleth: She’s all yours.
Dreylock then uses his powers to put Billie into the same robe that Christy is in. After he does that, he ways his hand at her and she shimmers into Seleth’s hand
Dreylock: Take her to the circle, we’re ready now
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INT- Police Station – Henry’s Office – Day
We see Paige walk into Henry’s office, he’s on the Phone
Henry: Chief…I’ll have to get back to you on that one. (talking to Chief) Ok. Ok. Bye. (to Paige, he’s off the phone now) Hey, how’s my wife doing?
Paige: (with a half-convincing face) Ok, I’m doing ok.
Henry: You’re not a very good liar Paige, tell me what’s going on.
Paige: Ok, I don’t know how to explain this.
Henry: Is it magic?
Paige: Yes.
Henry: Is it bad?
Paige: If me telling you that I might not survive a final battle is bad…then yes.
Henry: What? (confused) How can you joke about this?
Paige: Look, Henry, I love you and that’s why I’m coming to tell you can’t be around me while this is going down.
Henry: So this is really serious.
Paige: Yes.
Henry: And you think I’m going to let you go like this? I’m going to fight with you.
Paige: Did you not just hear that you can’t be around me?
Henry: Loud and clear. And you really think I’m going to sit back and let you die. I would give up the whole world for you and you really believe that I’m going to let this happen. That I’m going to sit here and let my wife tell me that she’s about to go into this Big Battle and she might not survive and I’m supposed to think that it’s all peachy? Come on Paige, you know me better than that.
Paige: Henry…If you really love me…
Henry: Then I will stay away until you’re done with what you have to do.
Paige: Yes.
Paige then walks over Henry, and Henry hugs her tightly
Henry: You’re scared aren’t you?
Paige: How do you know?
Henry: I’m your husband, remember.
Paige and Henry share a moment when they look into each other’s eyes and then they share a Kiss
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INT- Bay Mirror –Work Area – Day
Phoebe walks into the Work Area and Elise comes out ready to say something
Elise: Phoebe!
Phoebe: Elise.
Elise: Are you all done with the Family emergency, cause the column is great, but I think we could squeeze one more question in.
Phoebe: No, my family emergency is still an emergency, but I have decided to resign as the Bay Mirror Advice Columnist.
Elise: (dazzled) What! Phoebe, what’s going on?
Phoebe: Something serious.
Elise: You always have something serious going on this time of the year.
Phoebe: Yeah, that’s my life.
Elise: Phoebe. I can give you a flexible schedule, higher pay. Anything. You name it.
Phoebe: It’s not about the money or the schedule.
Elise: Then what is it Phoebe cause I gotta say you’re really freaking me out here.
Phoebe: It’s a lot of stuff that I would love to tell you, but you wouldn’t believe me if I did.
Elise then stops and looks at Phoebe like she’s gone crazy, but it shows that she really cares about Phoebe
Elise: Four Years.
Phoebe: Four Years?
Elise: That’s how long you’ve worked for the Bay Mirror. For me.
Phoebe: Ok, where are you going with this?
Elise: Phoebe you’re like family to me, and I just want to understand what’s going on.
Phoebe gives a look like she really wants to tell Elise what’s going on
Phoebe: Are you sure you want to know?
Elise: I think I really deserve to know.
Phoebe: Then step into my office and we can talk.
Phoebe and Elise then step into Phoebe’s Office and Phoebe closes the door
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INT- Victor’s Apartment – Day
Victor hears his doorbell ring. He goes to the door, he answers it and sees that it is Piper who has a lot of stuff if her hands. He takes the stuff from her hand and lets her in.
Victor: Whoa! I didn’t think the boys would be staying over this long, although they are a bundle of joy.
Piper then looks sad, but tries to be strong at the same time
Piper: Dad…
Victor: Piper…it’s something serious isn’t it?
Piper: Yeah…
Victor: Even more serious than that Zankou demon?
Piper: Yeah…
Victor: And you want the boys to be safe and stay with me cause you don’t think you and your sisters are going to make it out of this one.
Piper: Dad…Yeah, a lot isn’t it.
Victor: I just fake-buried you almost a year ago and now you want to tell me that this time is different?
Piper: It’s probably the only way to get Leo back.
Victor: These boys…
Piper: These boys miss their father dearly. And I don’t know what they’ll do if they don’t have their father in their life (Piper smiles at her dad, getting all teary eyed).
Victor: And they need a mother too, you girls needed me and your mother.
Piper: But we’re witches with a Destiny to fulfill.
Victor: Forget Destiny…(Victor starts to get emotional) These boys need you Piper.
Piper: They will always have me.
Victor: What am I going to do without my girls? (he starts crying)
Piper goes over and gives him a big hug, she starts crying too, but then she wipes her eyes
Piper: Where are the boys?
Victor: In the guest room.
Piper then walks to the guest room of the house. She reaches the guest room and she sees Wyatt coloring. The camera looks at Baby Chris who is in his walker. Wyatt sees that he needs a crayon that’s right by Baby Chris. Chris sees this and telekinetically sends the Crayons to Wyatt. Piper smiles but is sad because she’s about to leave her boys again
Piper: Hey buddies, what’ya doin’?
Wyatt: Hey mommy.
Piper then goes over to Wyatt and to see what he’s drawing
Piper: What’ya drawing little man?
Wyatt: You and daddy.
Piper: Let me see.
Piper then picks up the picture and sees Wyatt’s little drawing of her and Leo, Piper starts to tear up again, she pulls Wyatt over to her and Baby Chris telekinetically makes his walker come over to his mother.
Piper: Come here, my two very special boys (she takes Baby Chris out of his walker). You are very loved, you know that right? And mommy will always, always be with you no matter what. O‘K. Mommy is going to go bring daddy back so be good little boys for grandpa.
Piper sets Wyatt down and Chris Back into his walker. She then walks back to her Dad
Piper: Take good care of them…Good...(Piper starts to say goodbye)
Victor: Don’t say it. You’re coming back just like you do every other time.
Piper looks at him, giving him another hug, wishing that she believed this, and then walks towards the door to leave.
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INT- Demonic Cave – Eternal Night
Seleth walks out with Billie in his hands and the Triad are standing equidistant from each other, making a triangle with Christy in the middle.
Seleth: Here she is master.
Asmodeus: Set her into the triangle.
Seleth sets Billie in the Triangle with her sister, Seleth then get out of the Triangle
Seleth: How will this work, my master.
Asmodeus: We have control of the Key. If the Charmed Ones have taught the demon world anything, is that the power of sisters is a strong power to be reckoned with indeed. That’s how we will execute our plan. Now go, distract the sisters. Our site can be located because this process will weaken our power therefore weaken the cloak on this lair.
Seleth: Yes master.
Seleth then shimmers out, Billie then wakes up
Billie: (faintly) What’s…What’s happening.
Dreylock: Our plan is about to unfold.
Billie: (faintly) Why do you need me?
Java: You have the power of projection.
Billie: (faintly) But I thought my sister was “The Key”
Asmodeus: You’re right, she is “The Key”, but you’re the door that will bring upon the great evil of this world.
Billie: (faintly) No…
Asmodeus: Let us begin. Key!
Christy: Yes Master.
The Triad then start saying a very dark incantation. Christy lifts her sister up and puts her hands on the side of her head. Dark Energy comes out of Christy’s Hands and Billie starts to scream. Thunder and Lightning sounds can be heard in the background. The scene fades out with Billie screaming even louder.
END ACT II
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ LEAVE FEEDBACK IF YOU WANT TO!!! I hope you guys like!!! ACT 3 Will Be Up SOON!!!!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Feb 25, 2006 0:25:28 GMT -5
Wow!!!! I really love this fanfic!!! Post more, I want to read more!!! I loved when Phoebe said I love you to elise then she realized what she says. Piper and her father scene was very emotional. I can't wait to see what happens and how elise takes the news about Phoebe being a witch. Good job and please update son!
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Post by colerules on Feb 25, 2006 0:34:43 GMT -5
What episode did Prue and Piper get hit by Shax' energy ball?
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 25, 2006 11:02:16 GMT -5
Wow!!!! I really love this fanfic!!! Post more, I want to read more!!! I loved when Phoebe said I love you to elise then she realized what she says. Piper and her father scene was very emotional. I can't wait to see what happens and how elise takes the news about Phoebe being a witch. Good job and please update son! Thanks xxP3Halliwellxx, I'm working on act three right now, I am so glad that you like...Just wait until act 3 and 4, you're going to really be suprised what happens at the end and what starts off part 2!!!
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 25, 2006 11:03:13 GMT -5
What episode did Prue and Piper get hit by Shax' energy ball? 3.22- All Hell Breaks Loose...It says it in the first post
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 25, 2006 12:06:09 GMT -5
Really good story, I like it PLEASE FINISH. Not just for your fans, but for yourself as well.
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Post by sweet8 on Feb 25, 2006 12:44:03 GMT -5
*Very good. Two thumbs up!
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Post by hollypop on Feb 25, 2006 13:50:58 GMT -5
wow.. it feels like I've just watched an episode. I love what you're doing with Billie and Chrisy. Plus you are really writing the main characters quite well. You are doing an excellent job
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 25, 2006 19:21:01 GMT -5
ACT III
INT- Bay Mirror Phoebe’s Office – Day
The Camera pans on Elise Face who is very shocked at everything that Phoebe has just told her. She wants to say words, but everytime she opens her mouth no words come out.
Phoebe: It’s a lot to take in isn’t it.
Elise: A hell of a lot to take in. So magic and witches, that’s all real.
Phoebe: And demons too.
Elise: Demons?!?!?
Phoebe: Yes, I’m a good witch who who’s been fighting demons for eight years.
Elise: Eight Years!
Phoebe: Yeah.
Elise: Wow Phoebe.
Phoebe: It’s funny, because through Magic that’s how I got this job.
Elise: What you said a rhyme and you were the advice columnist.
Phoebe: Not exactly. Do you remember the advice columnist before me? Karen?
Elise: Ha, how can I forget her?
Phoebe: Well, these demons called Broker Demons infected her with one of their powers. I won’t go into much detail, but when they did that, she wanted to kill you.
Elise: What?
Phoebe: (giggling) Yeah.
Elise: Why?
Phoebe: Let’s just say you weren’t her favorite boss.
Elise: Well, when she left, you were the best thing that ever happened to this paper.
Phoebe: (blushing) Stop it.
Elise: No, really, whether magic brought you here or not, that first advice you gave was great. I actually still have it.
Phoebe: Really?
Elise: Really.
Phoebe then looks at her watch and realizes the time
Phoebe: Elise, I have to go.
Elise: I guess we’re not going to get that last question in.
Phoebe: I guess not.
Elise: Do you really have to quit?
Phoebe: Yes, I love giving advice, but something serious is going on, something I might not make it out of alive.
Elise: Is it one of those Homeland Security things?
Phoebe: No, this is one of those magical things.
Elise: So you’re telling me that the reason you’re qutting is because you might die.
Phoebe: Yes.
Elise: Well, I guess a two-weeks notice isn’t needed.
Phoebe: I guess not.
Elise gets up ready to walk out of Phoebe’s office
Elise: I believe that what ever happens Phoebe, you’re going to make it out it. You’re a very strong woman, one who I highly admire.
Phoebe: Thanks Elise.
Elise: And plus, I’m not letting you quit your job, so, you better come back.
Phoebe: Ok. Elise…
Elise: Yes
Phoebe: No one can ever know my secret.
Elise: Promise. (looks at Phoebe) I Love You Phoebe.
Phoebe: I Love You too, thanks for everything Elise…Good (Phoebe Starts to say goodbye)
Elise: (emotional) Don’t you dare, you’re coming back. Look at you (starts to cry) I haven’t cried since the advice you gave to Old and Antique about moving on and loving her age, her career and her life.
Phoebe goes to give he a hug, realizing it the question she answered was Elise. Elise then walks out of the office and closes the door
Phoebe: Paige!
Paige orbs into Phoebe’s Office
Paige: You ready.
Phoebe: I’m ready.
Phoebe grabs Paige’s Hand and they orb out of Phoebe’s Office
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INT- Halliwell Manor – Attic –Day
Paige in Phoebe Orb into the Attic, Piper is searching through the book
Piper: How did things go with Henry and Elise?
Paige: Well, I convinced Henry to stay away cause thing might get ugly.
Phoebe: I told Elise I was witch.
Paige: How did she take it?
Phoebe: She wasn’t too freaked out, but she wouldn’t let me quit so when I told her I might die, so I guess she’s ok with it. (to Piper) How did everything with Dad and the boys go?
Piper: Dad cried.
Phoebe: Really?
Piper: Yeah, and Chris used his powers.
Paige: So he’s coming into his powers! He and Wyatt might be a force to be reckoned with if we don’t make it.
Piper: Yeah.
Phoebe: So, everyone has said their goodbyes to everyone, right?
A Chime comes in the background and the camera focuses on the back of a woman
Patty: Everyone except for me.
The Girls then turn around to see their mother standing right in front of them
Paige: Mom?
Patty: Hello Paige.
Phoebe: Mom? (confused), What are you doing here?
Patty: Grams came back to the Afterlife crying. I asked her what was wrong but she told me to go talk to you girls. What’s going on?
Piper: Cliff notes version…we’re about to battle a great evil, like one we’ve never seen, and we might not even survive this battle, though if we win, we’ll get Leo back.
Patty: And you weren’t going to say goodbye.
Phoebe: Well everyone tells us not to say goodbye, and if we died, we hoped you and Grams would be the first people we’d see.
Paige: Plus we thought you guys get like some afterlife newsletter or something.
Patty: So what is this great evil you girls have to fight.
Piper: Well that’s the thing…we don’t know.
Phoebe: We thing it’s some evil group called The Triad, but they are toying around with us so we don’t thing there are the evil we have to face.
Paige: And one major thing. They were vanquished 5 years ago by Cole.
Patty: And what’s the plan?
Phoebe: Well The Triad kidnapped a power witch who has been staying here.
Paige: And her sister that Demons call “The Key”
Piper: So we’re going to scry for their location and then vanquish some demon behind and get our questions answered.
Patty: My Three Girls (She smiles at them).
Phoebe: Mom, before you died, did you ever dream of us making it this far.
Patty: I didn’t want you guys to end up like I did, that’s why I wanted to make sure that you girls became real close sisters. I knew once I had Phoebe that the Charmed Ones were going to be powerful, but first they needed to be sisters before witches.
Paige: (a little saddened) And that’s why you had to give me away.
Patty: We broke the rules, but look at what breaking the rules has lead us to, Wyatt, Chris.
Piper: But when Prue died…
Patty: When Prue died, I didn’t think you girls would make it, you girls didn’t even know about Paige. But you found her and that shows that this is your Destiny. The Charmed Ones can never be broken, you girls have proven that.
Piper, Phoebe and Paige get up and go hug their mom
Patty: You guys will defeat what ever comes your way, and remember the Power of Three will set you free.
Patty then leaves and it leaves the sisters hugging each other, they break the embrace and get to work
Paige: You don’t think they’ve killed Billie do you?
Phoebe: No. They are probably using her as leverage to get to us.
Piper: Paige, orb something of Billie’s up here so that we can scry for her.
Paige: Billie’s Brush!
Billie’s brush then orbs into Paige’s Hand, She then hands the Brush to Phoebe who takes a strand of hair from the Brush. Just as she is doing that, Paige hears a jingle from the Elders, she then turns her face up and rolls her eyes
Piper: What is it?
Paige: It’s the Elders
Phoebe: What do they want? Paige: They want me to go guard another whitelighter’s charge.
Piper: Great timing, you can’t go, we’ve got bigger stuff going on here.
Paige: I know that.
The Camera looks at Phoebe’s face who seems to be brewing an Idea
Phoebe: Paige, send me up to the Elders.
Paige: What? Why?
Phoebe: Trust me, I’ve got a plan.
Paige: What plan?
Phoebe: Paige, just trust me and send me up there.
Paige: Ok. Elders!
Phoebe then orbs up to the Elders, Just as she does that, Seleth and his minions shiver in
Piper: Great! Just great.
Paige: What are we going to do?
Piper: (whispering) Orb Potion bottles.
Paige: What?
Piper: Just do it.
Seleth throws an fireball and Piper blows the fireball up
Paige: Potion Bottles!
The Potion bottles orb and hit three of the demons, vanquishing them, Seleth and all his demons now throw fire and energy balls. Paige then orbs her and Piper from the attic.
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INT- Halliwell Manor - Living Room - Day
Paige and Piper orb into the Living room.
Piper: We picked a great time for Phoebe to leave. (looking up towards the sky) Phoebe.
Paige: She can't hear you.
Piper: I'm hoping the Elders will. Phoebe!
Seleth and his Minions shimmer down to the Living room and start throwing fire balls at Paige and Piper. Paige is deflecting them back, and Piper focuses her attetion on the demons and starts blowing up their fire balls and them
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INT- Elders Palace – Day
Phoebe orbs in while the Elders are in the mist of a meeting. Elders Jonas, Urban and Sandra turn around a little confused cause are not seeing the sister they wanted to see.
Jonas: Where is Paige?
Phoebe: Obviously at the Manor.
Urban: Why didn’t she come?
Phoebe: Because we’re currently occupied right now.
Urban: With what?
Phoebe: With the great evil we’re supposed to battle.
Jonas: So what are you doing here?
Phoebe: Enough with all the questions. I came here to get my powers back.
Sandra: We can’t do that.
Phoebe: You can’t, but you know someone who can.
Sandra: You don’t understand.
Phoebe: No, you obviously don’t understand. You guys left us hanging last year with only a spell to vanquish the Nexus to stop Zankou and "Be Well". Now there is a great evil that we don't see coming and not even you guys see coming. So right now, you're going to find a way for me to get my powers back.
The Three Elders look at each other, taking in what Phoebe has said
Urban: She’s right.
Sandra: Phoebe. We’ll go to The Tribunal for you and try our hardest to get your powers back, though there are no guarantees that they will restore them.
Phoebe: Make them see that I need them, we need them.
Sandra, Jonas and Look at Each other and then try to orb out
Phoebe: Wait
Sandra: Yes Phoebe
Phoebe: You think one of you guys can give me a lift back home?
Phoebe smiles and Sandra gives her a funny look
Sandra: Home!
Phoebe is then orbed home.
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INT- Demonic Layer – Eternal Night
The Traid are still saying their incantations, Billie is still screaming in pain and Christy is still allowing dark energy to come out of her hands around Billie’s head. Static then comes from the three members of the Triad and they Circle around Christy’s Head
Java: (in a loud and muffled, dark voice) Andu, Crycus, Liberorum, SHAX!
Dreylock: (in a loud and muffled, dark voice) Chrucylus, Nioudus, Liberorum, THE SOURCE!
Asmodeus: (in a loud and muffled, dark voice) Deus, Deux, Deorum, Liberorum, ZANKOU!
Christy and Billie scream as the Triad are emitting their energies out and then three dark Clouds appear over them, they then go into what looks like crystal cages. The clouds then settle in one by one. The first cloud settles and a crystal cage rises. After the first cloud settles completely, you see Shax imprisoned inside of a crystal cage. The second cloud settles and a crystal cage rises. After the second cloud settles completely, you see The Source imprisoned inside of a crystal cage. The third cloud settles and a crystal cage rises. After the third clouds settle completely you see Zankou, eyes blackened with the Nexus inside of him. Then a white coffin shines in darkly but mystically. The Triad withdraw the static they emitted and Christy and Billie fall out. The camera pans on Shax, The Source and Zankou. Then the camera settles on the white coffin.
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IM WORKING ON ACT FOUR RIGHT NOW!!! HOLD ON GUYS CAUSE IM ABOUT TO TAKE YOU GUYS ON A WILD RIDE, you though the beginning of the episode was the Beginning, this is the Beginning of the END!!! Leave feedback if you want!!! I'm going to post a recap of what's happened before act 4.
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 25, 2006 19:55:32 GMT -5
Recap:
TEASER: The Episode starts off with Billie and The Charmed Ones in a cave looking for The Triad. Billie finds a necklace with the triquetra. Billie takes it and then it then goes around her neck.
ACT I: Bille and The Charmed Ones talk about getting the Necklace off her neck. Billie uses it to scry for the Triad's lair. They find the Lair and Vanquish Demons. They also get demons to talk. One of the demons tell Bille and TCO's that Christy is being taken. Paige orbs Billie Home. Christy is taken and hurts Billie. Billie is taken with Christy and Seleth. The Charmed Ones meet one of the Triad Members, Asmodeus.
ACT II: The Charmed Ones chat with Asmodeus. After they realize Billie has been taken, they Argue. Grams comes in an ask why the are aruging. Grams tell the girls that its their destiny to fight. They listen but are skeptical and go to say their goodbyes. Paige goes to Henry and share moments with Henry. Phoebe goes to Elise and tells her that she's a witch. Piper goes to her Victor's and share moments with Victor. Piper talks to the boys and sees Chris uses his powers. She also sees Wyatt draw a Picture of her and Leo. Meanwhile, The Triad are going through with their plan and tells Billie she was apart of the Plan the whole time. Christy might be the Key but they say she's the door that will open the great evil into the world.
ACT III: Phoebe finishes telling Elise that she's a wtich. Phoebe and Elise shares moments and then she leaves. Paige, Phoebe and Piper tell each other about what happened when they went to tell the ones close to them what was going on. Patty then comes in an talks to the girls. She convinces the girls to keep fighting. Patty leaves and the Elders call. Paige orbs Phoebe up to the Elders. Phoebe demands her powers back. Seleth and his Minions come and try to kill Paige and Phoebe. Meanwhile The Triad uses Christy and Billie to bring back three of the most powerful demons, Shax, The Source, and Zankou. Also a mysterious white coffin is brought to the Cave also.
ACT IV coming soon!!!!
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 26, 2006 0:24:03 GMT -5
ACT IV-
Continued from ACT III
Zankou, The Source and Shax are looking around confused on where they are. Shax throws an energy ball at the crystal cage. It Defects back on him and hits him. Christy and Billie are still unconscious and the Triad are looking at the three most powerful Demons that will lead to the end of their plan
Zankou: What am I doing here?
Asmodeus: You’re apart of our endgame
The Source: ZANKOU!!!
Dreylock: (to Asmodeus) we’ve done it, we’ve brought back the three most powerful demons. Zankou, who focus on the The Charmed Ones as sisters, The Source who came close to stealing all their powers.
Java: And Shax, the only demon who was able to kill a Charmed One.
Asmodeus: Yes, we have…to bad you guys won’t be around for the true plan.
Dreylock: What?
Asmodeus makes a two big fire balls and he vanquishes Dreylock and Java
Asmodeus: Now I have my own Power of Three.
Zankou: Asmodeus! What is the meaning of this, let me out of here.
Asmodeus: You will be let out in due time.
Asmodeus then uses his powers and telekinetically put Christy on her feet, he also makes her regain consciousness. He then uses his static and it circles around her head. Christy screams and The Three most powerful demons just look, helpless to do anything in their cages
Asmodeus: It’s almost time
The Camera then focuses on Christy who is scream and gasping in pain, eyes glowing gray.
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INT- Halliwell Manor – Living Room – Day
Seleth and his minions seems to be winning the battle. The scene takes us to behind a couch where Piper and Paige are hiding.
Paige: We’re losing
Piper: Thanks Ms. Obvious
Paige: What are we going to do?
Piper: Does it look like I know what we’re going to do?
Paige: Their going to find a way to break into this crystal cage.
Piper: Well, we need to come up with something. Quick.
Paige: (coming up with an idea) I got it!
Piper: What?
Paige: This. (Paige then shapeshifts into one of the minions) Crystal.
The crystal then orbs into Paige’s hand
Paige: (disguised as a minion) Hold this.
Paige then orbs away
Minion #1: The Cage is down, lets get them.
Seleth: Wait. They wouldn’t have let the cage down for nothing.
The camera then cuts back to behind the couch, Piper is sitting there, but then Phoebe iorbs in.
Phoebe: What’s going on?
Piper: Ssh!
The Demons hear Phoebe’s voice and then start to make fire balls. The camera then cuts to the stairs where Paige (disguised as a minion is coming down).
Paige: (disguised as a minion) I hear them upstairs.
Seleth and his minions then shimmer to the attic. Paige (disguised as a minion) then orbs back to behind the couch, she then shapeshifts back to herself
Paige: (annoyed) Phoebe…what’d you have to go to the Elders for?
Phoebe: I asked them for my powers back.
Piper: Well, while you were asking for your powers back, we were here getting our a$$ kicked by the demons.
A light then glows down Phoebe’s body
Paige: What was that?
Phoebe: I think I just got my powers back.
Piper: (sarcastically) That’s great, now lets get these d**n demons out of the house.
Phoebe: I got a plan.
Paige: Here she goes with her plans again.
The girls then get up from behind the couch, Paige and Piper on each side of Phoebe. The Demons then shimmer back down to the living room
Phoebe: Take my hand
Seleth: Tricky witches.
Phoebe closes her eyes and the demons make fireballs. Seleth and his minions then throw them. Paige and Piper then put up their hands and the fireballs are deflected and hit all the minions, but Seleth stays alive. Seleth then shimmers away.
Paige: The Power of Three.
Phoebe: Quick, orb us to Dad’s.
Piper: Why?
Phoebe: Because he’s going to try and kill Dad and the boys.
Paige then orbs them to Victor’s house.
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INT- Victor’s House- Victor’s Living Room – Afternoon
Victor is sitting down with Wyatt sitting right next to him and Chris on his lap. He is reading them a story. Wyatt is laugh and Chris is smiling. Chris then telekinetically turns the page.
Victor: This little piggy went to market.
Wyatt: This little piggy stayed home.
Victor: Right Wyatt…This little piggy cried wee, wee, wee
Seleth: (shimmering in) All the Way Home.
Victor: Who are you?
Seleth: Your killer.
Seleth makes a fireball and throws it, but Chris puts up his hands and telekinetically deflects it back. It hits Seleth and throws him into the wall. There is a letter opener on Victor’s table. Chris sees this and uses his hand again and sends the letter opener into Seleth’s heart. He screams in pain. Wyatt then puts up his hands
Wyatt: Boom!
Seleth then blows up. Victor sits up amazed at what the Boys just did
Victor: Whoa! Good Job Boys.
Wyatt: Thank you Granpa.
Paige, Phoebe and Piper orb in
Piper: Dad, you guys ok?
Victor: Obviously you got some boys who are very good with their powers.
Phoebe: (picking up Chris and holding Wyatt’s hand)You guys vanquished the bad demon guy! (To Chris, who is smiling) Yes you did! Yes you did!
Paige: (to Piper) I told you so.
Victor: Was that the big bad evil?
Piper: No…but how was he vanquished so easily?
Phoebe: Who cares? (putting Wyatt and Chris down and walking towards the scorch mark the demon left) my nephews kicked some Demon a$$. (Phoebe then loses her breath)
PREMONITION- Phoebe sees a vision of the past Where The Triad are using their powers, to make Christy do something to Billie. She then sees Billie unconscious and the triquetra on her neck glowing.
Phoebe: Oh No.
Paige: What did you see?
Phoebe: Billie…
Piper: What happened? Phoebe: The Demon, he was just a another distraction, a sacrifice to give us a message. We gotta get to her.
Piper: What’s going on Phoebe.
Phoebe: I think she’s dying.
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INT- Demonic Cave – Eternal Night
Asmodeus is still doing things to Christy. He seems to now be absorbing her power and adding it to his own. He then puts one of his hands and shoots his static to Shax’s age. He then absorbs Shax into himself and the crystal cage disappears. He then puts his hand towards The Source and then absorbs the Source into himself and the crystal cage disappers. He then puts his hand towards Zankou and then absorbs Zankou into himself and the crystal cage disappears. He then stops and Christy falls, unconscious. Asmodeus bring his head down and you can see his eyes are completely black
Asmodeus: It is done!
Asmodeus then turns into a Dark Aura and goes up into the sky, he then directs himself over to the white coffin that was brought to the cave. A Dark Aura then fills the white coffin. The Camera then focuses on Billie and the triquetra on her neck glowing.
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INT- Halliwell Manor – Attic – Afternoon
Piper is at the book, Paige is scrying with Billie’s Hair and Phoebe is at the potion table writing a spell and making a potion.
Piper: “Power of the witches rise, course unseen across the skies, come to us who call you near, come to us and settle here”
Phoebe: Piper, it won’t work if she’s unconscious or if their layer is cloaked.
Paige: Or dead. I swear if Billie is dead I don’t know if I’ll be able to forgive myself.
Phoebe: Let’s not think that way.
Piper: But she’s right, we focused on our lives thinking the Triad would just leave her alone, but we were wrong and now she’s paying for our mistakes.
The scrying crystal makes a little noise and has found the location of Billie and the Triads’s headquarters.
Paige: Got it! Phoebe you got that spell ready.
Phoebe: Yeah.
Phoebe graps her chest
Phoebe: Guys…do you feel that.
Piper: Like somebody’s trying to reach out to you or something.
Phoebe: Yes.
Paige: I feel it too.
The Charmed ones are sitting at their respective places and Billie literally shines in
Billie: Yes! I did it.
Paige: Billie!
Paige then gets up and tries to give Billie a hug but falls right though her
Billie: I’m not really real. I’m only my subconscious. Guys…I think I’m dying.
Piper: How did you get here?
Billie: Before I passed out, I put all my power into my subconscious and tried to project myself back to you guys, but I guess it didn’t work until now.
Phoebe: What did Christy do to you. I saw a glimpse of it in a premonition.
Billie: She didn’t actually do it. The Triad made her. They made her go through my mind so that she could get access to my power of projection. Then they made her use my power.
Paige: (after getting off the ground) What did they do?
Billie: They made her, well me, bring back three Demons, I think their names are Zankou, Shax and The Source.
Phoebe: What!
Piper: (worried) What are they going to do with them?
Billie: I don’t know, but they made me bring a white coffin to their cave too.
Paige: A white coffin? Do you know who was in it.
Billie: No. But you guys gotta get down there.
Paige: We have the location.
Billie: Hurry. You guys, I’m sorry for all the times I didn’t listen to you, about magic, about my sister, you guys were right the whole time.
Paige: Billie, we’re the ones who are sorry, we should have came for you sooner.
Piper: It doesn’t matter now. We have to get down there and vanquish whatever evil The Triad has let out.
Phoebe: Wait, what if it's another trap, If Billie is right, Shax, the Source and Zankou has been ressurrected. We can't go down there without amo.
Piper: We gotta take all the potions. You did work on vanquishing spells, we know the vanquishing spells to vanquish the Source, Shax and Zankou.
Phoebe: We're going to need crystals, everything, we've got to give it our all you guys.
Paige: So this is really it, we're really going to fight the greatest evils we've ever face.
Piper: Except for the fact they are working together as one.
Phoebe: So...the Angel of Destiny was right when she said we might not make it. We barely made it when we faced the three of the on seperate occasions.
Paige: Well, girls let's get ready to save the world once again.
The Girls go to the middle and hold hands and close their eyes
Piper: For Leo, Wyatt, Chris and Dad
Phoebe: For Elise, Melinda, and Mom
Paige: For Henry, Sam, and Grams
Billie: For Christy. Paige stands in the middle and takes Phoebe’s and Pipers hand. They then orb down to the Lair.
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INT- Demonic Lair – Eternal Night
Paige, Phoebe and Piper orb into the Lair, they see Christy and Billie unconscious and no white coffin. Billie then shines her projected subconscious down to the lair.
Phoebe: Where’s the Triad, The Source, Shax and Zankou?
Billie: I don’t know.
Paige: I thought you said there was a white coffin here?
Billie: It was. (she points to the spot where it was) It was right there.
Piper: Well, it’s not there now. Keep your eyes out, they could be anywhere.
Familiar Voice: What are you talking about Piper, I’m right here.
Piper, Phoebe, Paige and Billie turn around to see the person who was talking to them. Piper, Phoebe and Paige’s face are horrified at the sight they are seeing. The camera then goes to Piper’s face who’s crying.
Piper: Prue?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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OK SO THATS THE END OF PART ONE!!! I TOLD YOU GUYS IT WOULDN'T HIT YOU TO THE END!!! I HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE PART ONE. PART TWO WILL BE COMING SOON!!! LEAVE FEEDBACK IF YOU WANT!!!! PRUE IS BACK!!!I HOPE I DIDN'T SHOCK YOU GUYS TOO MUCH...
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Post by hollypop on Feb 26, 2006 17:31:18 GMT -5
I really love how you're writing this, *[Soul of the Empath]*. You're right- It did 'hit' me in the face when Prue came back..... I swear I got misty-eyed. This is a great FanFic... please don't get discouraged. When person writes, they write for themselves first. The lack of comments can get disheartening but I'm a fan so you just have to finish it. That's an order
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 26, 2006 17:58:00 GMT -5
Hollypop, thanks for the advice and the enoouragement. Really, it means alot to me, more than you probably know. Thank you, thank you, thank you, I will be writing part two soon! I won't leave myself or you hanging to long.
One Thanks Once Again Hollypop, Empath
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Post by prue on Feb 26, 2006 18:29:52 GMT -5
Ok, I logged in simply to post a comment about your story. Let me just say, HOLY COW!!! This is great! Very riveting! It has me on the edge of my seat! I love how you have brought Prue into this! I really do hope you continue this fanfic... it is really good!!!
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 26, 2006 19:23:45 GMT -5
Ok, I logged in simply to post a comment about your story. Let me just say, HOLY COW!!! This is great! Very riveting! It has me on the edge of my seat! I love how you have brought Prue into this! I really do hope you continue this fanfic... it is really good!!! THANKS SO MUCH!!! I thought nobody liked it, but I will continue, I promise to have the teaser and act one posted by tuesday!!! Thanks for the comment.... One Part Two will be ready Tuesday Empath
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Post by hydrokinisis on Feb 26, 2006 19:41:34 GMT -5
I AGREE!!! Great story!!! Keep writing!!! ;D
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Post by prue on Feb 27, 2006 21:55:12 GMT -5
i don't always have the time to post things, let alone read many of the fanfics here since i have been taking a history class on top of holding down a full time job that requires alot of extra work at home. i read this fic and was literally blown away by the plot. it is so original, and way more compelling than what we are seeing each week on tv. it is really too bad that you aren't one of the writers on the show. i look forward to reading your next installment on Wednesday. ( I just won't have any time tuesday to look in on it, but I will on Wed!) and don't worry about whether anyone likes your story... write for the sheer pleasure of it. i used to write all the time and i had to give it up when i got older. adult responsibilities and all that jazz got in the way. i still try to write something every now and again, and i have tons of charmed stories that i have started, but simply don't have the time to really finish. so, i live vicariously through the great talent that i find on sites like this by great writers like you! so don't give up, write while there is still pleasure in it! blessed be!
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 28, 2006 18:11:30 GMT -5
THANK YOU SO MUCH EVERYONE WHO POSTED!!! Your support really helps. Thanks for the advise also! You guys rock to the infinite power (ha...gotta do math homework now!) The End Power of Three, Part Two Teaser and Act one has been posted. I hope that you enjoy!
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