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Post by adzpower on Dec 4, 2016 18:16:38 GMT -5
I was thinking about maybe making them a male and female twin duo, not the traditional females everyone thinks of them as. I don't know, I think it might be more interesting to see a brother/sister duo. I personally would keep them as witches, and perhaps give them one power each. And it could be since they're twins they get one power each from one of the Charmed Ones. So maybe one twin has telekinesis, one has astral projection. One has freezing, one has exploding. That sort of thing. Although with Paige its harder since she has that whitelighter half. I think I might disregard it completely and just have them be witches, making it so that the amount of whitelighter in them is too diluted for them to inherit any of the abilities, keeping them pure witch. I think most fans think of them as girls since they were two girls in the flashforward. But if your alternate universe skips the flashforward, you definitely could do it that way. But you're making them much too powerful giving them a power from each sister, especially when their cousins already have some of those powers. I hope you decide to skip that idea. If you made the twins a boy and a girl but kept them to only having passive powers, I'd love it. Also I hate the idea that they are just witches when their cousins aren't. Darn, I was so excited about you doing a story within the universe I'd set up, but I'm afraid this isn't even close to it. BUT if you like the idea of Mitchells vs Halliwells with the Mitchells being just as powerful as the Halliwells, I hope you decide to write it your way anyway and enjoy doing it. I just wish I was good at original stuff (I know I'm not) so I could do this one my way. It's why I have so much respect for fans who *can* write original stories. Oh whoops, I explained it wrong, I didn't mean a power from every sister, just one power each from ONE sister. My thinking of them being pure witch is because I kind of hate them being half something else, and more importantly because unlike her sisters, Paige married a mortal, I figured they would be even more likely to just be witches. I think that I could work in a genetic angle, where it's all down to chance what the kids would inherit, so for example a kid who had brunette parents might end up with blonde hair. So just because Paige is half-whitelighter doesn't mean that either of her kids would be, like a recessive gene. Piper's kids ended up half-whitelighter because their father was a pure whitelighter so they had more chance of inheriting it. Just playing around with ideas at this point. I feel like the show relied too much on the whole "just because one character is one thing, all the rest have to be as well", and that doesn't have to be the case. Just because Wyatt was part whitelighter, that didn't mean Chris had to be as well. |
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Post by sol on Dec 5, 2016 1:49:11 GMT -5
I also magine the whitelighter gene as a recessive gene, so I imagine that the twins'll have witches powers as I imagine Phoebe' daughters as witches and not Cupids
I like Charmed fanfic when the writers recall that Charmed talks of magic, not of superpowers, otherwise they might as well write fanfic about Marvel heroes os Supergirl
About the twins I'ld put first their being twins, so I'ld like for them a power that is amplified when they act together, such as the ability to see the future or the past through shared dreams
Returning to the Turner family, I imagine they perfectly normal: if everyone has powers, the powers become normality, not the exception!
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Post by BriannaWarren on Dec 5, 2016 4:14:11 GMT -5
I also magine the whitelighter gene as a recessive gene, so I imagine that the twins'll have witches powers as I imagine Phoebe' daughters as witches and not Cupids I like Charmed fanfic when the writers recall that Charmed talks of magic, not of superpowers, otherwise they might as well write fanfic about Marvel heroes os Supergirl About the twins I'ld put first their being twins, so I'ld like for them a power that is amplified when they act together, such as the ability to see the future or the past through shared dreams Returning to the Turner family, I imagine they perfectly normal: if everyone has powers, the powers become normality, not the exception! I am hoping not to make powers the norm but to give them abilities rather than powers and I wouldn't focus on the Turner family, I would focus on Elizabeth's family and her demonic heritage. |
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Post by adzpower on Dec 5, 2016 5:16:10 GMT -5
I also magine the whitelighter gene as a recessive gene, so I imagine that the twins'll have witches powers as I imagine Phoebe' daughters as witches and not Cupids I like Charmed fanfic when the writers recall that Charmed talks of magic, not of superpowers, otherwise they might as well write fanfic about Marvel heroes os Supergirl About the twins I'ld put first their being twins, so I'ld like for them a power that is amplified when they act together, such as the ability to see the future or the past through shared dreams Returning to the Turner family, I imagine they perfectly normal: if everyone has powers, the powers become normality, not the exception! I am also trying to think of a way to have the twins use different sides of the same power, it's difficult though. I was thinking some kind of astral projection, where one twin can astral project, and the other can contact spirits when in astral form to help them. So one can have astral projection, and the other can have astral manipulation, I don't want them to be too complicated though. |
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Post by Esmeralda on Dec 5, 2016 8:17:11 GMT -5
I also magine the whitelighter gene as a recessive gene, so I imagine that the twins'll have witches powers as I imagine Phoebe' daughters as witches and not Cupids I like Charmed fanfic when the writers recall that Charmed talks of magic, not of superpowers, otherwise they might as well write fanfic about Marvel heroes os Supergirl About the twins I'ld put first their being twins, so I'ld like for them a power that is amplified when they act together, such as the ability to see the future or the past through shared dreams As always, I'm willing to admit it when I'm proven wrong, and this definitely makes a lot of sense. Good job! So my twins as I knew them go bye-bye. Sorry, Charlie and Cassie - I enjoyed you while I was thinking of you. I really like the idea of the twins having the same power which is amplified when they do them together. Perhaps they could also have telepathy like Prue and Piper did in 'They're Everywhere'. |
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Post by BriannaWarren on Dec 5, 2016 9:09:57 GMT -5
I also magine the whitelighter gene as a recessive gene, so I imagine that the twins'll have witches powers as I imagine Phoebe' daughters as witches and not Cupids I like Charmed fanfic when the writers recall that Charmed talks of magic, not of superpowers, otherwise they might as well write fanfic about Marvel heroes os Supergirl About the twins I'ld put first their being twins, so I'ld like for them a power that is amplified when they act together, such as the ability to see the future or the past through shared dreams As always, I'm willing to admit it when I'm proven wrong, and this definitely makes a lot of sense. Good job! So my twins as I knew them go bye-bye. Sorry, Charlie and Cassie - I enjoyed you while I was thinking of you. I really like the idea of the twins having the same power which is amplified when they do them together. Perhaps they could also have telepathy like Prue and Piper did in 'They're Everywhere'. And maybe their Telepathy power could advance so when they are apart they can still talk to eachother all they would have to do is think about eachother and boom Advanced Teleplathy. What do you think? |
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Post by Esmeralda on Dec 5, 2016 19:27:56 GMT -5
As always, I'm willing to admit it when I'm proven wrong, and this definitely makes a lot of sense. Good job! So my twins as I knew them go bye-bye. Sorry, Charlie and Cassie - I enjoyed you while I was thinking of you. I really like the idea of the twins having the same power which is amplified when they do them together. Perhaps they could also have telepathy like Prue and Piper did in 'They're Everywhere'. And maybe their Telepathy power could advance so when they are apart they can still talk to each other all they would have to do is think about each other and boom Advanced Telepathy. What do you think? *nods* Definitely like that idea. Although I hope they don't already have the advanced version at the beginning of your tale - let them develop it over time so your reader can see what their reaction to gaining that power is - perhaps one is a bit more secretive than the other and isn't as happy about this new power while the other is thrilled. But then it's the one who's not happy about it that discovers she's glad she has it. Although as always, just take that as a suggestion. If it works for what you have in mind, go for it. If not, forget it. |
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Post by sol on Dec 6, 2016 2:21:29 GMT -5
I also magine the whitelighter gene as a recessive gene, so I imagine that the twins'll have witches powers as I imagine Phoebe' daughters as witches and not Cupids I like Charmed fanfic when the writers recall that Charmed talks of magic, not of superpowers, otherwise they might as well write fanfic about Marvel heroes os Supergirl About the twins I'ld put first their being twins, so I'ld like for them a power that is amplified when they act together, such as the ability to see the future or the past through shared dreams As always, I'm willing to admit it when I'm proven wrong, and this definitely makes a lot of sense. Good job! So my twins as I knew them go bye-bye. Sorry, Charlie and Cassie - I enjoyed you while I was thinking of you. I really like the idea of the twins having the same power which is amplified when they do them together. Perhaps they could also have telepathy like Prue and Piper did in 'They're Everywhere'. There is not a wronge or right way to portray NG characters, only different points of view  Usually I don't like abundance of powers as I don't like a new Power of Three because I think it'ld be something rare and precious and for this reason I love Wyatt, because he is something different fron Warren family, more son of magic than Piper and Leo's I like Cassandra and Charlotte, nice names I think that Charlotte'ld be one of Phoebe's girls due to my beloved All Halliwell Eve and I can't believe that Phoebe'ld name a daughter Cassandra, it'ld be problematic to be able to see the future if your name is Cassandra! But this is only my opinion |
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Post by sol on Dec 6, 2016 2:24:27 GMT -5
I also magine the whitelighter gene as a recessive gene, so I imagine that the twins'll have witches powers as I imagine Phoebe' daughters as witches and not Cupids I like Charmed fanfic when the writers recall that Charmed talks of magic, not of superpowers, otherwise they might as well write fanfic about Marvel heroes os Supergirl About the twins I'ld put first their being twins, so I'ld like for them a power that is amplified when they act together, such as the ability to see the future or the past through shared dreams Returning to the Turner family, I imagine they perfectly normal: if everyone has powers, the powers become normality, not the exception! I am also trying to think of a way to have the twins use different sides of the same power, it's difficult though. I was thinking some kind of astral projection, where one twin can astral project, and the other can contact spirits when in astral form to help them. So one can have astral projection, and the other can have astral manipulation, I don't want them to be too complicated though. Maybe the twins'ld have a sort of invisible astral projection like Rex' s ,just joining their mental forces |
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Post by cyma on Dec 7, 2016 14:47:16 GMT -5
This is the first FanFic that I am going to go public with because mostly my FanFics are about alternate realities, and let's be frank, no body wants to read another Charmed Alternate Reality fanfiction. Which alternate reality fics are they? Season 4? Season 6? All seasons rewritten from the beginning? But most important question, what gave you the impression nobody wants to read another alternate reality fic? www.fanfiction.net/s/9644667/1/Prue-Piper-and-Paige-Charmed-and-Dangerouswww.fanfiction.net/s/8608923/1/Into-the-Flameswww.fanfiction.net/s/12169309/1/Keyarchiveofourown.org/works/5614141?show_comments=true&view_full_work=true#commentsIf it's the reviews that worry you, then it's probably because everyone nowadays likes the ‘likes’ or ‘kudos’ or ‘follows’ and ‘favorite’ function. It’s easy and typing too much on mobile kind of hurts the wrist and fingers. Other reason is Charmed fandom is sort of old compared to other new fandoms. But still it’s impressively active. But you know what’s really impressive? This: www.fanfiction.net/s/5782108/1/Harry-Potter-and-the-Methods-of-RationalityThe most reviewed, most favorited, most followed fic I’ve stumbled across is an alternate reality fic. I don’t even read Harry Potter fics, yet somehow I find myself reading this one. Just insane  Well....if I was some kind of sadist, sure it’s totally possible for evil me to emotionally inflict pain on you. But right now I’m more interested in helping you emotionally hurt fictional characters and also building them up. Speaking of which, have you decided on the plot? Also at the start of the fic, is everyone from the old cast and new cast of characters going to be alive? Because all that will have an affect on the living characters’ personalities too. If you've finished the whole fic or even one chapter of each of those alternate reality fics you never posted publicly, then do share them publicly. Here at the Cafe, at Fanfiction.net, AO3, Wattpad and even Tumblr if you have an account. Fears like 'If I don't get everything exactly perfect, my story will fail’ and ‘after all the effort I've put into it my story, researching and everything and it still failed’, will never disappear. But they’ll dramatically decrease once you’ve gotten used to sharing fics in public. So seriously, go on a posting frenzy. See what happens. |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 9, 2016 13:29:53 GMT -5
Hey!
Do you have news about your fiction ? Even the new characters pages?
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Post by BriannaWarren on Dec 10, 2016 0:45:19 GMT -5
Hey! Do you have news about your fiction ? Even the new characters pages? The new character profiles will be uploaded soon. Please remain patient, it will be greatly appreciated. Thank you, for your patience. |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 18, 2016 8:50:04 GMT -5
Yeah, of course I will remain patient! I'm just excited to see more about your fiction!
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Post by BriannaWarren2.0 on Aug 17, 2021 16:56:26 GMT -5
These aren't the final product however I thought I might as well release a draft of what is to come.
Penelope Kyra Halliwell (Ladybug); Witch
Basic information:
DOB: October 31 2007 | Born at the Manor
Eye Colour: Brown
Skin Colour: Olive
Hair Colour: Brown
Powers: Premonitions/ Psychic Reflection.
Occupation: Bartender at Halliwell’s (Piper’s restaurant).
Personality:
Penelope is like her mother, she is a free spirited, open-minded, rebellious young woman however because of those traits she is a risk taker and sometimes unable to see the consequences in those risks.
She is proficient in potion-brewing, leading her to mixology, where she landed a job at Halliwell’s after a bartender fell ill having Piper ask Penelope take the shift.
Pearl Victoria Halliwell: Witch
Basic Information:
DOB: January 24 2009 | Hospital
Eye Colour: Brown.
Skin Colour: Olive
Hair Colour: Brown
Powers: Telekinesis/Levitation.
Occupation: Antique Store Owner.
Personality:
Pearl is responsible and intelligent due to these traits she is strong-willed and stubborn believing that she is always right can make her feel prideful when she is right and jealous when she is wrong often lashing out through passive-aggressive remarks. Pearl throughout her teen years spent the majority of her free time doing her homework or reading books.
With her deceased aunt Prue being her inspiration, she has decided to follow in her footsteps, she however opened a store called ‘The Vintage Huntress’.
She is an amazing spell-writer, being able to use her knowledge in poetry to write beautifully written spells.
Paris Valentina Halliwell: Witch
Basic Information:
DOB: February 14 2011 | Hospital
Eye Colour: Green.
Skin Colour: White.
Hair Colour: Black.
Powers: Stop time/Empathy.
Occupation: Beauty Therapist.
Personality:
Being an empath, she is sensitive and a loner, she can’t stand to be around a lot of people for a long time often needing time alone, she is often seen as an outcast, she wears a lot of black due to its empathic protection.
She loves beauty and everything that comes along with it, having taken beauty courses after High School, she is able to work in a space that doesn’t require a lot of people and that makes her happy.
Paris is an amazing Scryer, she is able to use her intuition to be able to figure out where her and her sisters need to go.
Combined Abilities:
- Spell writing.
- Potion Brewing.
- Scrying.
- Mediumship
- Telepathy
Even though I have written above what they specialise in when it comes to basic witch abilities such as potion brewing, spell writing and scrying, all three have these abilities however they aren’t proficient in all areas meaning that they have to rely on each other.
Their Sisterhood:
Unlike Prue, Piper and Phoebe all three of the sisters have a mature approach when it comes towards arguments with them making a vow to never go to bed angry, they understand that their powers are tied to their emotions so they never let themselves get angry with each other due to their mother telling them that they will lose their powers just like their mother and their aunts did. They will often have late night talks about their work and love lives with Paris opting out of relationships due to her being able to feel heartbreak and not wanting to have those same feelings, Penelope and Pearl often worry about her but they always make her feel included until she needs a break.
All three of them love taking classes together from kickboxing to painting, they have a beautiful relationship envied by most.
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Post by Melinda Halliwell on Aug 18, 2021 1:57:01 GMT -5
These women sound nice Brianna Warren.
I like how they each have set skills the same as the original sisters that complement them in their jobs and in general also and how they work together with common goals concerning the supernatural and innocents plus
making them have flaws shows they're human too and not total Mary Sue's which certain people dislike reading as well.
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Post by BriannaWarren2.0 on Aug 18, 2021 8:50:22 GMT -5
These women sound nice Brianna Warren. I like how they each have set skills the same as the original sisters that complement them in their jobs and in general also and how they work together with common goals concerning the supernatural and innocents plus making them have flaws shows they're human too and not total Mary Sue's which certain people dislike reading as well. I am so happy that you like the character profiles I released, I don't like Mary Sue's either, I love characters that are written like real people with real problems. I am also writing episodes where they have to deal with non-magical issues too, I loved the episodes in Buffy where she has to deal with debt and where Buffy's performance as a legal guardian was shown, I would have loved if they had shown non supernatural problems on Charmed, they could have dealt with so many problems since they are adults, I loved the episode of Charmed where Piper had to fix up the P3, it really brought in a real element to the series. |
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